So far with my first draft, I have analyzed both fashion regarding Esther and Jane Eyre in The Bell Jar and Jane Eyre. I think my analysis is pretty strong, especially since my sources are not one hundred percent fashion related, and I have worked really hard to find good and logical analysis that fits the characters. My biggest concern is how to blend all of the pieces for my stories together, and how I am going to add quotes, secondary sources, intro, outro, etc. The only thing I have right now is analysis, but I was planning on going about this paper that way from the beginning. From my peers, I would like advice on how to make my analysis stronger and how to transition all of my pieces together so my paper reads smoothly. Any areas where my classmates believe a quote is mandated, that would be an appreciated note too! Next, I am going to draft my analysis on Wuthering Heights, then I will go back and add secondary sources, quotes, and my final touches (intro, outro, works cited, other aspects to an academic paper), and anything else I might need to do to ensure this paper meets the requirement and is the best it can be!
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